A young girl who’s named angeline will be now attending her graduation but before they go to the school with her mother her grandmother came to her house to give her a graduation gift to her grandchild and it was a gold necklace. Angeline was very happy with her grandmother’s gift but her mother wanted her grandmother to leave now and its look like don’t have good relationship with each other. Angeline was shocked about what her mother did to her grandmother she really think that this two has a problem which she wanted to know. She wonders why her mother is angry to her grandmother. After the graduation ceremony of Angeline they just decided to went home and at thet night Angeline asked her mother why is it that they have a problem with each other its look like her mother is very angry to her grandmother. Angeline’s mother now opens to her daughter what was really happen. It’s just about that Angeline mother all knew that her grandmother betrayed her grandfather because for all them with her siblings she is the only one who has fair skin and she has a different father.
The story is good, and it was a very inspiring story. It’s just that I feel it should have a good ending not like this because the story makes incomplete and as a reader it confuses me a lot all the events become fast until such thing become question mark for me. What about the relationship of her mother and her siblings what is the reaction on the characters in that diary how is it happen. Although I understand the story but I feel something must be there to complete it.
There is no Explanation to the other main part of the story which it is hard for me to reflect in some part of the story which I can reflect to the feelings of the characters and bring me to not to understand what emotion is in there in the story which is important specially to the readers . Perhaps it should have factors which can bring effect to the readers for us to give emotions and life to the story.
The plot of the story perhaps it must give more to emphasize and give more explanation and information of what happen why some events happen that so fast. Sometimes the events are not mentioned in the story which gives question why the characters happen they are in other setting again. The plot is lack of clarification at the same time lack of various forms which can help the story to be more effective to the readers and more appreciative.
The story is good, and it was a very inspiring story. It’s just that I feel it should have a good ending not like this because the story makes incomplete and as a reader it confuses me a lot all the events become fast until such thing become question mark for me. What about the relationship of her mother and her siblings what is the reaction on the characters in that diary how is it happen. Although I understand the story but I feel something must be there to complete it.
There is no Explanation to the other main part of the story which it is hard for me to reflect in some part of the story which I can reflect to the feelings of the characters and bring me to not to understand what emotion is in there in the story which is important specially to the readers . Perhaps it should have factors which can bring effect to the readers for us to give emotions and life to the story.
The plot of the story perhaps it must give more to emphasize and give more explanation and information of what happen why some events happen that so fast. Sometimes the events are not mentioned in the story which gives question why the characters happen they are in other setting again. The plot is lack of clarification at the same time lack of various forms which can help the story to be more effective to the readers and more appreciative.
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